Flame Star

Thousands of kilometres outside of central city, there’s this remote island called Secrets of Wonder. Legend says there is a cave full of hundreds of colours but you are only allowed to touch five colours. It says if you touch more than five the cave will collapse on you and you will perish in a horrible death.

I heard that my parents were going there for a vacation so I decided to go with them and see if the legend was truth. But the problem with me, is I can’t live without video games and KFC so I asked my mum when we were going and this is what she said “Tuesday 8th 1999.” That was today. I quickly ran into my room packed my clothes and I was ready to go to the Secrets of Wonder.

When we arrived there my parents told me that they have superpowers and that they will take me to the cave. But first they took me to their secret hideout next to the beach. They said we were never going back to Central City because of Vilgax. When it was bedtime I snuck out and I saw the cave. I went in and saw the colours and I said to myself, “The legend is true.” I touched five colours then I felt something unusual happening in my body. I felt excited so I ran back to my room. The next day when I woke up I felt different so I told my parents that I had been to the cave last night.

They told me that I had powers now and I am ready to go and fight Vilgax but I was scared because I hadn’t test my powers yet. So my dad trained me for two days, then they sent me off to fight Vilgax.

But there was a problem. Vilgax had water superpowers and my super powers are super strength, flame and ultimate speed. When I got there,  I saw kids running away. I quickly used my speed to fight him.  He nearly froze me but I dodged it I used my star flame move and I got him right in the face. Then he used his frozen death power and froze me.  

I tried to use my super strength on the ice but I couldn’t. Then I felt a little bit of flame from my star flame power. That gave me strength so I could break the ice. The ice shattered and I quickly used my starblast attack on him, but that wasn’t enough I needed more power to take him down. Just when I had enough power he teleported to his lab.


When I arrived at his lab I realised that it was a trap! I thought he came here because he wanted his army to take me down. But I was wrong. He came here because he had a plan to freeze Central City!

When I saw him next to his frozen machine  I used my star speed and quickly dashed towards the machine. I used all of my super strength but it only cracked a little.  Vilgax turned and punched me with his super fist.
Then he tried to drown me with water blast but I used my flame and turned that water into steam. Vilgax was wild and he prepared to finish me with his  ice attack. But he accidentally froze the steam that was all around him and turned himself into a giant block of ice.   
I punched him back with my super strength and he broke into millions of pieces.

His freeze machine only had three seconds until it would freeze Central City!! It was my chance to use my starblast attack to stop the machine. It exploded with only one second to spare. Central City was safe from danger!
Now whenever people need help,they know that there’s no need to fear, Flame Star is here.  
His true identity is Brian Wala. (But that’s a secret between you and me.)